Virgina+beach+writing+assessment


 * This mountain right here was a slow one because I kind of took my time and took to many breaks so I didn’t try my best on this one I took the way I knew and I did not try to go a way I didn’t know to try new things because I think maybe I just did not try or something.  **



When, I get on the bus, I want to sit down and put on my iPod and thing of the good day ahead of me. I don’t want to have to put on a seat beat. Well I agree and degree with this theory. I’m going to take a little bit of your time and tell you why my three topics contain kids, safely, and cars. At the end of this all are going to tie in one so it will make better since. When you read this and see where I’m coming from on why we somewhat need seat belt on bus.

My first topic is going to be on safely. The reason why I say safely is because yes, you I do thing seat belts are very safe. I also think there are not needed for buses. If you put seat belt on buses there should be an age limit for it. I think the age group should range from first though fifth grade. They are still young and some might still be in a car seat and there are so used to wearing them at this point. If the parents want the kids wearing seat belt so bad there should take them to school themselves.

The next topic we are going to discuss in the car. I bet your saying a car we are talking about busses, Well yeas I know I really think seat belt are only necessary in the car. The car is so small compare to a bus in a car I think more can happen. When you get in a car crush u can get hurt more in a car then a bus. The only bad think about getting hurt on a bus is hitting you head on the window next to you.

The last topic is going to be on is annoying, the reason why is because I personal think that seat belt are very annoying. It does not giving you a lot of range to move around very much, meaning if you forgot to do your homework you can do it on the bus. If you’re wearing a seat belt it’s going to be harder to do. Most important to me is that it is laying on your neck it is kind of painful. That is the reason I think there are annoying and those are a few things to just think about other kids or maybe even teenager having to wear seat belts.

Well I told you every reason I can think of on this topic of seat belt. I think I’m more in the middle for the choice of seat belt on the bus. I hope you really take time and think about it before you just do it and take my idea to mind. I hope you understand better where I’m coming from with you and the seat belt on the bus. Thank you for taking time out of your business time and reading my opinion.