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The theme to my wiki space is mountain climbing because it’s has a lot to do with my writing. When I first started writing this year it was like being at the bottom of the mountain and just looking at what is ahead of me, and how I’m going to plan or how I’m going to get over this mountain. When I get to move on, I feel lost. I’m going to do this I just really take my time and really look at what is ahead of me in the writing. When I finish it, it’s like being at the top of the mountain, and looking at all the beautiful things in the world. That is why my favorite writing we did this year is the Chinese writing, because it was more about searching our minds and really stopping and just seeing yourself as a person. You can sit down and think about what is you purpose really is here.

The writing expression domain of my writing is very well. I think I have room for improvement but who doesn’t. I know since we have been going back over the commas, and the periods. It has gotten a little better. I know even when this year is over I still need to work on my writing domain and make sure the reader can just understand me. On the topic that they will really understand where I am coming from on the paper. So when I really do my writing expression I think I do very well on it One of the writing I can look back on one of the poem I did for the Asian literature because I gave a detailed topic and finish it off very strong and I know it made the reader want to keep reading more and I saw the was the best one to use is I was really trying to show my writing expression and how well it is.

The thing I suggest with the most is usage and mechanics domain. To this day I have been still trying to make my mechanics such as formatting and punctuation a little better even though I still have a hard time doing this. I have been getting a little better when it comes to it because this year we really have been working on using mechanics as a person I really need it. As a kid I always had a hard time doing this and that is why I like when we do our nature observes because it just more as a free write and you don’t need to really worry about that. I really enjoy the free write because there is no end to the nature so you really don’t know any periods because periods mean the end of something. When I did the nature one I really enjoy it because it was like me taking a break from all the mechanics. The way you can really see how I suggest with it is by looking at some of my essays. When we do essay I have no one who can really poof read it for me and to correct my mistakes on essay I’m on my own just like for the Doll’s House.

As my writing comes to the end, I have come a long way because this year I have been challenges to think beyond, where I think most of the time to think. Passed the limit and I think that is what really made me to become a stronger writing and to really climb over the mountain, not to look back and to turn around to keep moving forward though know I might take the wrong turn the first time I know I will come back and go in the right way and do my best, as I am and to keep growing as a writer. I hope in the future I can look back and really see that this year I really climbed the mountain I have been suggesting to get over for years.